Thursday, November 29, 2012

potter's hand

shaping dreams..
the potter's hand on his
wheel of fortune
--Vinay Leo R; Bangalore, India


Line One introduces us to the artistic spirit. There are the hands set to work, following the instructions of the muse. At the potters wheel is where we find them in synchronicity. Spirit and mass. This is such a beautiful story told in haiku by Vinay; it has an enchanting fairy tale quality. His choice of words is effective. He shapes his haiku into a first place poem among his fellow writers. Line Three is where the worker, artist, or breadwinner shapes too his life, be it one of
affluence or borderline sustenance, here it starts, in the realm of possibilities; like the haiku starts, with a dream; a wish in the mind of the haiku persona to bring to life an experience to enrich the mind of his readers.


Well Done Vinay
gillena cox
Caribbean Kigo Kukai - founder/co ordinator

The kigo for this kukai was potter's hand

6 comments:

  1. Hey Gillena, thank you so much for featuring my haiku here :) And for reflecting the thoughts so very nicely. Just what I wanted to express in the haiku.

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  2. Glad you stopped by Leo


    much love...

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  3. Glad you stopped by Nimue


    much love...

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  4. Lovely haiku, volumes in ten mere words.

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  5. Thank you for stopping by Judy


    much love...

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